==> Be the mole dude

Your name is SORICO MORPHA, you are 6 AND A HALF SWEEPS OLD, and a pretty low BROWN BLOOD. You live secluded from everyone else so you don’t have many friends. Although the ones you do have are great. Your house is underground, making you have to dig tunnels to make new hallways or rooms. You live with a STAR NOSED MOLE LUSUS you call MoleDad.

Sprite is good! You might want to make the symbol a little smaller though, i dont know if its just me but it seems a little big.

                You have much in common with your Lusus. Like your VERY POOR EYE SIGHT. Your glasses always get covered in dust from living in a house made of dirt, but contacts are out of the question. Your horns also RESSEMBLE YOUR LUSUS’ NOSE just a bit. You teeth are also SMALL AND SHARP just like your Lusus. Under that bandage you have an actual mole, as in the skin blemish. You think it looks stupid so you cover it up.

Why are contacts out of the question? :0 and the thing with the actual mole is funny i like that.

                Your friends are few because MoleDad doesn’t let you go outside much. You have two really good friends that you met through TROLLIAN, Misaka and Nonaah. You could be developing an ASHEN RELATIONSHIP with them, Nonaah being the one making it Ashen and not Black. You’re not very sure how these things work though. You frequently as Nonaah about THE SEA, as he says there’s a whole other world in the water he lives by yet you only see a few drops of water when it’s your turn to drink every day. Your Troll Tag is undergroundChisler and you type in a way that reAlly shΩws Ωff yΩur symbΩl

I think you should have a little bit more fun with the quirk, make it more unique, perhaps with *stars at the beginning and end of his sentences* like a mole nose, also i just have to point out that nonaah sounds exactly like the italian word for grandmother. eheh.

                Some of your MANY INTERESTS include SCULPTING, DIGGING, and FINDING WAYS TO ANNOY MISAKA. You’re a very good sculptor, and your Lusus recognizes that. He makes you wear a shirt with the ASTROLOGICAL SIGN for sculptor’s tools on it in your blood color. All of the furniture you have in your room was carved from the little wood you have or sculpted from clay and hardened. Your MAIN TABLE actually has wave designs on the legs to remind you of the things you don’t have. It’s really a BAD HABIT that you keep reminding yourself that other trolls have more things than you, but you do it anyway.

Sad and good, i love sad/angsty stuff. Makes sense that he would sculpt as i imagine he would be good at digging and carving. I like the interaction you have between your lusus and troll, most people just act as if the lusus is a pet or something.

You love to DIG, and as previously mentioned you have to dig to make new hallways or rooms. You try to MAKE TUNNELS OUTSIDE but your Lusus always catches you before you make it to the surface. Because of that your room is riddled with UNFINISHED TUNNELS. You have to be careful where you step, otherwise you might fall through the ones on the ground. Once while you were digging you found this cool white thing that your Lusus defined as an OWL SKELETON. You’ve kept it as a memento ever since you found it.

Oh boy do you love ANNOYING MISAKA. She’s one of those trolls that can have an argument with you and then talk about the new exciting thing she just got in two seconds. You are at a disadvantage because she always brings up your blood color, which is lower than hers. Although she won’t tell you what hers is exactly.

Sounds like fun mischief between the two, his relationships sound good so far.

Your Strife Specibus is CLAWKIND. You made your own claws based off your Lusus’ and you think you did a pretty good job at it. They’re made of steel that you found and the wrist piece is leather that your Lusus brought back by your request. They can do lethal damage, at least on your part of the echeladder.

So does this mean he also has access to some sort of forge to mend steal? That would be interesting.

Your Fetch Modus is the BAKCPACK MODUS. You can fit as many things in there as you like, but nothing bigger than the backpack itself may fit. Also, depending on the order you put them in it takes a shorter or longer time to get them out.

When you start the game, your KERNELSPRITE is first prototyped with a statue of a TWO HEADED SNAKE. Then you get mad at it and accidentally throw your FOSSILIZED OWL, prototyping it to be a two headed owl with a snake body and wings. It kind of creeps you out.

When you enter the Medium you go to the LAND OF DUST AND BURROWS (LODAB). You’re pretty sure that your job is to make passageways for the other players to get to different parts of the game easier. Your God Tier title is the THIEF OF LIFE and you don’t really see how that affects you as you are currently.

Most of this seems to be very well done, but you left out what his views exactly on the blood caste were, this should be included. Thanks for submitting!

-Squidd

One at a time, preferably!

sorry this took awhile, I’ve been rather busy irl. anyways, let’s review this fantroll!

====> Be the Umbrella Troll

Nice sprite! Although it’s kind of hard for me to see her symbol on that white vest. And is she not wearing any other clothes?

Your name is KYTKIN UMBREL and you are EIGHT SWEEPS OLD. Your blood considered LIME GREEN despite how close it looks to being yellow. However, you are not ashamed of this considering that if anyone mocked you for it, they would find their head impaled upon your umbrella. It should be noted you have a HORRIBLE TEMPER and get set off by the smallest things.

Sounds good so far!

Speaking of your temper, nothing irritates you more than trolls underestimating you because of your size. You are a SOLIDER. Or, you will be when you are old enough. Your life is the fight, when you are fighting is the only time you feel like you really belong. Because of your blood, most troll for some reason thing you should be somewhat stable. They are HORRIBLY WRONG. You are not in the less emotionally stable.

Due to this temper of yours, you learned to fight with what you consider GREAT SKILL, despite you being VERY SMALL. You use an UMBRELLAKIND strife specibus but it barely counts as that, but the umbrella you use is actually close to a staff then the classic umbrella. It is five feet long and the umbrella portion is made of thick beast skin. Also, on the top of the weapon, there is a one foot curved STEEL BLADE, however, you dislike using it. You prefer to beat your prey into submission. You use your weapon like you were hatched with it. In fact, you have had the weapon your whole life. The wood on it is new since it has been replaced many times, but its history goes back all the way to your ancestor’s days. The only reason you have it is it was stashed in a secret hidie hole near your hive. Actually, you ancestor used a weapon much like this one. Sadly, you are not smart enough to make the connection. It should be noted, despite your strength, you aren’t as strong as you think you are.

Good, but does your troll have other hobbies besides fighting that you could maybe develop? And I like the strife specibus!

When you aren’t using this weapon on the trolls who irritate you, you use it to hunt in the forest surrounding your hive. You are NOT ALL THAT SKILLED at hunting, but you normally bring back something big enough to eat once every three days. You consider the whole forest part of your hive, by the way, and DO NOT LIKE WHEN OTHER TROLLS ENTER IT. Then again it barely counts as a forest, it’s as much a  forest as your umbrella is an umbrella, and it’s not supposed to be all yours. You originally shared it with two other trolls but since one is dead and one left, leaving the whole thing to you. It’s barely big enough to support you to begin with.

Speaking of your hive, you  NO LONGER LIVE THERE. You moirail invited you to move in with him, since you were having a rough time. Plus, your hive is NOT FIT TO HAVE ANYONE IN IT. Huge parts of the wall are smashed and there is mold all over the place from a broken water pipe that you never fixed. Your hive did not have running water or electricity and you got your from running an extension cord from your husk top to one of the abandoned hives in your forest. Originally, it was a rather plain two floor hive with three rooms down stairs, and four upstairs, but it no longer resembles that due to the damage to the upstairs section of your hive. Three of the rooms are cut off and one of them is missing a large part of the floor. You no longer trust it enough to live on the top floor and used to stay in the room dedicated to your lusus.

This sounds interesting, but maybe add how her hive got in that condition. 

Your lusus is a HUGE, BLOOD DRINKING insect type. While she used to be only about three feet long, she grew dramatically over the sweeps, now taking up most of your hive, which you thank whatever gods there are you left as just blank space when you were designing it. Now that she is so big, she can’t feed herself and you have to DONATE BLOOD to her daily. Some days,  you forget though and you have to collect extra, but your temper makes it easy to get some. Unfortunately for you, troll blood is the only type of blood she can drink so you have to kill troll whether you like it or not.

This is good. The lusus sounds pretty cool. 

The fact you have survived until this point is rather surprising considering that you have terrible eyesight, but you guess your x 3 SENSE OF SMELL makes up for that. You lack any abilities other than that, but you don’t mind. You would rather not have freaky powers like low bloods. Not that there is anything wrong with them, they just FREAK YOU OUT. Besides, high bloods and low bloods, they’ve never have to work to become strong. They are born with strength and power or with mutations that give them great strength. Well, most of the time. You had to work hard to become how you are today. You really don’t have that much respect for those who were just born with strength. Considering you do have a mutation, you are clearly just a massive HYPOCRITE.

Not sure about some of this. Mutations are pretty overdone in fantrolls. But otherwise doesn’t sound too bad.

You had lived in your forest your whole life, since you had always been too small for your age. You lusus made it hard to meet other trolls and she always kept you away from the other trolls in your forest. This left you a little SOCIALLY IMPAIRED until you started going past the borders your lusus had set up for you and met others. Some things that are common knowledge for other trolls is confusing to you, like why you have to wear clothes when its warm enough out to go without. In fact, you still like to strip down when nobody stops you. Clothes are so itchy and uncomfortable. You refuse to wear PANTS altogether and call it the bane of your existence. Normally, though, you moirail stops you from stripping in public.

So she doesn’t like wearing clothes? Oh my. :U

You really don’t understand money either. It just seems like a waste of time. You are used to hunting your own prey, skinning their pelts for warmth and living off the land. Living with your moirail has been hard because of this. He cooks and supplies food for you. While this has helped you gain some much needed weight, but you feel useless now that you don’t need to hunt. You still need to get troll blood to your lusus, though, so you are keeping your fighting skills sharp and have taken up SEWING and ART to fill  the time you would normally spend hunting.

Sounds good.

Were you ever to play a game called Sgrub, you would have been the WITCH OF RAIN. You would be a PROSPIT dreamer and your land would be of PAPER AND VOMIT. Your quest bed would be located at the bottom of the only clean water on the planet and requires you to face your HYDROPHOBIA and drown at the bottom to ascend. Should you ascend, the little vomit eating fish would be set loose and in a week would purify the planet, renaming it the land of PAPER AND WATER. Your consorts would be rather mean spirited LIME COLOUREDTURTLES.

Interesting land, it’s definitely different. This seems to be the only mention of her fear of water though, I’d like to see you build on that a bit more.  Everything here seems good though!

Your Trollian Tag is generalTempest and U tIp with everE letter that has its nAm said capitalized and NE other letter that would have contribUted to this sound ErAsed.

I like the trolltag! The quirk seems pretty interesting too.

Your troll seems pretty good overall. I’d like to hear more about her moirail that you mentioned a few times. And what does her symbol mean? She seems like a good troll though! Thank you for submitting!

-E

sorry i cant give you more than this tl;dr right now, but if that sounds ok, im going to continue working on it! :)

Name: Lissot Tsaoba
Name Background: Lissotriton is a genus of salamandrid newts that occur in Europe (thanks wikipedia), and Tsaoba is boast backwards, with an extra a.
Trolltag: uncherishedAristocrat
Trolltag Background: His blood color is the highest possible blood color for landdwellers, and he feels like he isnt seen as royal by other trolls.
Blood Color: Indigo/Purple, like Gamzee
Shirt Symbol: basically a Z with two lines through it like the euro symbol €
Lusus: Newt
Fetch Modus: Can Modus - items are stored in cans. produces a lot of trash.
Strife Specibus: axekind (halberd)

he is kind of a hardcore gamer and likes soda and polluting the ocean, because seadwellers are something he really cant stand.

Seems good all around, even though there isnt much here. Keep working on him! Seems like a fun OC.

-Squidd 

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==> BE THE COROMORTIOLOGIST.

 Our first fantroll! Nice art!

You are now the COROMORTIOLOGIST.

Your name is KILOXS MARANA, a CYANBLOOD living in the hollowed out center of a MASSIVE TREE you call your HIVE. You are just over SEVEN SWEEPS OLD and live with your OWLDAD LUSUS.

He isn’t that bad, you suppose. At times, he brings you the dead corpses of his kills from his various hunts, which you immediately DISSECT AND STUDY. If he happens to bring in anything peculiar or exceptionally odd, you FOSSILIZE IT IN AMBER and use it to DECORATE YOUR HIVE. Of course, most of your fossilized beauties are from your own finds. You spend most of your time out and about searching for UNUSUAL CADAVERS and dragging them back to your home to EXAMINE AND FOSSILIZE.

Im not sure it’d be possible for him to create his own fossils, as that takes millions of years to happen! :0 Other than that everything seems fine and dandy! ( also the owldad along with fossils reminds me of animal crossing’s blathers, hehe)

Fossilizing dead things is but one of your MANY INTERESTS. Included in your interests are PALEONTOLOGY and BIOLOGY, though what really piques your interests are ANCIENT FOSSILS FROM TIMES LONG PAST, not those silly little things you find dragged off to the side of a forest path. Instead of probing them with your ever-handy EMBALMING TOOLS, you take great care in keeping those intact and hanging them on your walls, your favorite being in the form of the swirling AMMONITE LUSUS FOSSIL you keep on your neck. Or rather, what remained of the fossil. It was only one little piece that you’d managed to find inside an old parcel, after all. Your LONG CYAN COAT was also found in said aforementioned parcel, along with a book filled with research notes prompting you to believe that it had all previously belonged to your ANCESTOR. Some trolls find the fact that you wear such a glaringly unfitting coat ODD, but YOU DON’T REALLY CARE WHAT THEY HAVE TO SAY ON THE MATTER. Your ancestor was cool from what you know of him, and you wish to be just like him. Surely you will one day grow taller and fill the rest of the coat out. At least, you hope so.

Good idea with the ancestor leaving a package! I dont think ive ever seen that done before. 

You like to FLARP on occasion, which has led to more than a few close shaves on your part. Fortunately for you, it also provides a wonderful scenario for you to collect more bodies to decorate you hive with, so it all evens itself out in your thinkpan. ROLE PLAYING to you is only fun if you can get something out of it in the end, and you are VERY PICKY when it comes to who you are willing to play with. Your feelings towards the HEMOSPECTRUM are NOT THE STRONGEST, but you certainly do not ignore it. You typically do not like dealing with GUTTERBLOODS or anyone much lower than yourself on the hemospectrum unless they can show themselves to hold enough mental capacity to engage in a well thought out conversation with you. While it GREATLY PAINS YOU to have to deal with any of the IDIOTIC BANTER of the trolls HIGHER THAN YOU on the hemospectrum, you usually grudgingly go along with whatever it is that they want since you believe that THAT IS SIMPLY THE WAY THINGS ARE SUPPOSED TO BE.

Everything here seems to be in order. Very nicely done. 

You yourself are a BIT HYPOCRITICAL. You act superior to anyone that you perceive as not as smart as you are - which is pretty much most anyone - and behave almost condescendingly. That is, until the person you are speaking to starts to get a little HOSTILE, to which you either TAKE THEM OUT WITH YOUR CANNULA or, if it seems as if they are much larger than you by any amount, RUN AWAY AS QUICKLY AS YOU CAN. As such, you can act quite COWARDLY at times, giving yourself NO END OF GRIEF over how YOU REALLY SUCK AT ACTUAL FIGHTING.

You liken yourself to be something of a scientist, and dream one day of following in the footsteps of your ancestor to become a COROMORTIOLOGIST. While other trolls tend to look upon them as simply there to gather the abandoned bodies of the deceased, you hold anyone in the profession with a tremendous amount of respect. It is up to them, after all, to collect discarded bodies and find the cause of their demise, on top of dealing with properly getting rid of them. As such, you can come off as a bit SNOBBY sometimes, and prefer to keep to yourself instead of interacting with other trolls, mostly because you’re SCRAWNY and wouldn’t really look forward to a brawl against anyone bigger than you. As such, you tend to lean towards STABBING PEOPLE WITH YOUR CANNULA or trying to outwit them instead of any hand to hand combat.

You may want to refer to this as his CANNULAKIND strife specibus. 

CADAVERS and SKELETONS fascinate you, as if the fact that you decorate every inch of your living space with them is not enough to make that clear. Your horns replicate the bends on the lower half of your symbol, and you use your RESEARCH MODUS despite its difficulties in that it only gives you items once you have taken detailed notes on their scientific attributes.

Your handle is misguidedTheorist [MT] and you ☠ < suppose that you are 4tunate 4 all you have

You are the KNIGHT OF DEATH from the LAND OF FOSSILS AND GLOW [LoFaG]

Once you enter the MEDIUM, you will find that your consorts are BLUE BATS who like ARCHITECTURE. You are a PROSPIT DREAMER.

everything here seems well done besides the little things i may have mentioned. On a side note you may want to go into a little bit more detail on his hive and lusus. How often does he feed his lusus and how does the lusus treat its charge? The last thing is you didnt say anything about his quadrants/relationships! 

Thanks for our first submission!

-Squidd 

The blog is open to review any fantrolls and ask any questions! We have a lot of free time so everything will be done pretty quickly.